Tiki
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Tiki
Feb 9, 2010 21:07:32 GMT -5
Post by Tiki on Feb 9, 2010 21:07:32 GMT -5
*glances at siggeh!*
Name: Tiki; Ti; Ki
Gender: female
Race: Shakame
Role: traveler
Personality: She's very nice and respects most, if they deserve her respect. She can be very caring if she wants to be, but she falls in love easily. Tiki is very generous, she will help any in need of it even if it risks her life. She likes to help others. Tiki is very flirty, she likes to be around the guys and can almost always seduce them into doing what she wants... sometimes. She's easy to love and is quite trust worthy, she will keep any secret. However, she isn't easily impressed and is stubborn a lot of times. Tiki is also very intellegant and is super playful.
Description: Coat: White; Markings: Grey/Black muzzle and black on her paws/feet, whatever; Eye Color: Pinkish red
Worship: no worshiping
Skills: she's very good at seducing males into doing what she wants... that is... if you consider that a talent
Weaknesses: falls in love easily; her beauty can get her in trouble (she was once raped); her intellegance gets her the title of smart ass
Weapons: none?
Additional Forms: N/A
Family: they all died
Mate/Wife/Wives/Husband: no mate, sadly...
History: Tiki prefers not to talk about it
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Tiki
Feb 12, 2010 23:32:29 GMT -5
Post by Pyro on Feb 12, 2010 23:32:29 GMT -5
I'd like to see a bit more detail. This application has the basics down and is decent in that aspect. However, it would be even better if you took those basics and expanded them.
Her personality is good...but try going into depth more.
Her description needs a lot more. We require complete sentences for this. Additionally Lapaki/Shekame are able to take on an anthro form in additon to their quad, so you should have a description of that as well.
If you're having trouble, feel free to pm me or take a look at some of the already accepted applications. ;3
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